Two Ways to Use a Semicolon
+To splice (or join) two related sentences
+To write a complex list where grouped items in a list use a comma or conjunction
The Rules for Using a Semicolon
+When splicing sentences with semicolons, a complete sentence (that includes a subject AND predicate/verb) MUST be on both sides of the semicolon.
Good Example: It was thirteen degrees below zero; trust me, the sleeping bag wasn’t enough.
Bad Example: It was thirteen degrees below zero and I needed; a sleeping bag and ten blankets.
+When splicing sentences with semicolons, both sentences on either side of the semicolon MUST be directly related and there should be a clear and logical connection between the two.
Good Example: Camping is one of Harrion’s favorite activities; he anticipates going weeks in advance.
Bad Example: Camping is one of Harrion’s favorite activities; Jenny used to make dutch oven cobbler.
+When using semicolons in a complex list, at least on of the list items should include commas or conjunctions.
Good Example: Brenda has lived in four cities: Dallas, TX; Jackson Hole, WY; Raleigh, NC; and Metropolis, IL.
Good Example: My favorite pizza combinations are ham, pineapples, and peppers; pepperoni and olives; and mushrooms, bell peppers, and hard-boiled eggs.
Bad Example: When I went to the store, I bought chicken; crackers; and cheese.
+When using semicolons in a complex list, the first semicolon goes AFTER the the first list item, never before.
Good Example: My favorite pizza combinations are ham, pineapples, and peppers; pepperoni and olives; and mushrooms, bell peppers, and hard-boiled eggs.
Bad Example: My favorite pizza combinations are; ham, pineapples, and peppers; pepperoni and olives; and mushrooms, bell peppers, and hard-boiled eggs.
When NOT to Use a Semicolon
+With a coordinating conjunction
Bad Example: I thought it would be fun to play in the rain; but, after I nearly froze to death, I changed my mind.
Why You Would Want to Use a Semicolon
+Provide variance to sentence structure
+Speed up reading and mood of prose
+Make reading related sentences feel more connected
+Sound smart (many people don’t use them right, so when you do, you look brilliant!)
Try It!
+Splice two related sentences for sentence variety and flow
+Write a complicated list with commas and semicolons
More Semicolon Examples
As I was riding up the hill, on the horse, she jumped the creek and bucked me off; dust was all around me from the fall.
I want to go to Los Angeles, CA to visit my uncle; San Diego, CA to visit my cousins; and Memphis, TN just to hear the music!
She likes to write girly, romantic poems; short, informative blogs; and attention-getting, aggressive headlines.